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December 28, 2012
A time of blossoming inside and out for Kokeshi; spectacular watercolors from =Natalia-Luz.
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Kokeshi

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Finally my part of the trade with ~blood-pleasures is ready :dummy:
This is her OC Kokeshi, it's a boy :meow:
Watercolors on the Montval paper my heart aches everytime I use it, but it deserved

Her part:
Image size
1234x936px 1.24 MB
Make
HP
Model
HP pstc4200
Date Taken
Nov 19, 2012, 10:49:46 AM
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

A critique it is <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="35" height="21" alt=":blowkiss:" title="Here's a kiss for you, my love!"/> Picture you've conjured appeals to it's viewer from a thumbnail already, warm coloring invites to a closer look. Next thing that catches my eye is a face profile, shape of the nose and lips, beautifully drawn (I thought it was a girl, too, so easy to judge by long eye lashes and thin neck). What speaks to me is the simplicity of the picture, it gives space to emotion.

There is one little detail I noticed that disturbs my viewing experience, and I'm not certain whether it's purposely done or an accident - position of one of the branches the seems as if it was growing from his mouth. I'd lead it a little lower, by the shoulders, to the other side of the picture, to balance the composition. This is, however, only my opinion (:

Overall, this is another lovely work of yours, I'm happy to see you enjoying watercolor <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart"/>