A so crative way to talk about a delicate theme...I've been around it the last months so I understand your feeling. Watercolors, when correctly used, can pass a lot of emotion to the painting, and that's the biggest point in this piece. The cold colors, the sensation of "fading away" and the sorrow of the little figures...Even the crosses, I loved how you showed so much through details. The expression of the woman seems true in her suffering...
All I can do is give it high rates, because I loved everything in this painting. It touched me in a way only who fear the loss of a dear one can be
This must be the best Critique I've ever gotten... maybe because I see you've so much understanding for this piece through your own life, thank you!